The sentence is correct. It sells nothing.
Take a Polish shop's line: 'Zamów do 14:00, a jutro paczka będzie u Ciebie.' A literal English version reads: 'Order until 14:00, and tomorrow the parcel will be at you.' Every word is right. No English shop would say it. The version that sells is 'Order by 2 pm and it arrives tomorrow.'
Translation moves words. Transcreation moves the effect.
A translator's job is fidelity to the source. A transcreator's job is fidelity to the reader. The question changes from 'what does this say?' to 'what is this trying to do, and how would someone write that here?' Sometimes the answer is close to the original. Sometimes a joke, a proverb or a whole paragraph is replaced.
Not translated. Written again, in the other language.
When you need which.
Contracts, manuals, certificates and anything an office or a court will read need a translator, and often a sworn one. We do not do that. Websites, product pages, emails, ads and decks need transcreation, because their job is to persuade.
How we do it.
We read the source for intent. A native speaker of the target language writes the new version, adapting idiom, units and tone. A second native speaker reviews it. We keep a short glossary so a term is the same on page two and page nine, and we note every place we changed the meaning on purpose.